Your elevator pitch was great. I think you did a great job including statistics about how many roofers can become prone to hazardous weather conditions and what kind of injuries they are susceptible to. You also did a great job explaining the size of the market and how much revenue is shared within the market and what material your product will be made of. Great job!
I wish at the very beginning you introduced yourself. That hook was the best one I’ve ever heard, it was both a scenario and a fact. It seemed like a normal conversation, with good pacing and no technical language. At the end, I wish instead of asking us to join you made another appointment, it sounded like you already made this product.
I love how you started off your pitch with a hook to get the audience's attention and gave them a situation where they could place themselves in the potential buyer's shoes. I also liked your consistent use of hand gestures that were in sync with the points you made in presenting your case. You were very well spoken and knew all the facts that you were presenting. Good job!
Hi Micheal! I love the anecdote you used for the being of your speech, a wonderful hook. As well as this I liked that you explained the misconception of the metal helmets being more dangerous than the regular materials used. You really did your research, having the price point and the added overall revenue in the speech really hammers down on this product and the reason to start creating it. Well done!
Hey Michael!
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was great. I think you did a great job including statistics about how many roofers can become prone to hazardous weather conditions and what kind of injuries they are susceptible to. You also did a great job explaining the size of the market and how much revenue is shared within the market and what material your product will be made of. Great job!
I wish at the very beginning you introduced yourself. That hook was the best one I’ve ever heard, it was both a scenario and a fact. It seemed like a normal conversation, with good pacing and no technical language. At the end, I wish instead of asking us to join you made another appointment, it sounded like you already made this product.
ReplyDeleteHey Michael,
ReplyDeleteI love how you started off your pitch with a hook to get the audience's attention and gave them a situation where they could place themselves in the potential buyer's shoes. I also liked your consistent use of hand gestures that were in sync with the points you made in presenting your case. You were very well spoken and knew all the facts that you were presenting. Good job!
Hi Micheal!
ReplyDeleteI love the anecdote you used for the being of your speech, a wonderful hook. As well as this I liked that you explained the misconception of the metal helmets being more dangerous than the regular materials used. You really did your research, having the price point and the added overall revenue in the speech really hammers down on this product and the reason to start creating it. Well done!