1) https://youtu.be/GA9bhHrnBBU
2) Based on my peer reviews, I received a lot of positive feedback on the research and statistical information that was provided---the market size, how much revenue is generated within the market, and the material composition of my proposed product. I was also told that using an anecdote at the beginning of the pitch really made it captivating from the get-go. Further, it was expressed that my hand gestures were appropriately used in accordance with my points, and the pace at which I was speaking was very helpful in allowing the information to be conveyed effectively. Thus, insights on my delivery and content proved to be the most helpful.
3) Based on my feedback, I was recommended that I introduce myself in the beginning so that my audience knows who I am. I incorporated this aspect into my new elevator pitch. Further, at the end of my first pitch, I asked for my "investors" to join me in my endeavor to protect roofers. However, I was told that this implied that I already had a product made and ready to be sold. Thus, in my new elevator pitch, I instead ask for another appointment so that I can further discuss my proposed business concept.
Hi Michael!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your updated video, the added welcome really grabs and hooks the viewer and future prospects. I'm glad you realized that it sounded like you had already configured this product and switched it to and idea of a product. Overall great work, good presentation as well as attire!
Hi Michael,
ReplyDeleteThe introduction to your pitch is completely captivating and attention grabbing. You provide quality, yet simple statistics that further validate the validity of your product. Your tone is consistent and professional throughout your entire presentation. I would suggest that you describe the risks posed to roofers who are struck by lightning a bit more and take away the pricing component at the end. From my understanding of elevator pitches, it seems that this would be premature to describe to a potential investor upon your first meeting. Overall, wonderful job.